The Legend of Gunung Senyum (Short Story)
The Legend of Gunung Senyum
Long time ago there live a young guy called Pak Lah. He is a guy with good manner.
One of his hobbies is captivating bird in the jungle.
One day he goes to the jungle to catch some bird. He whistles and capture them. Unbeknownst to him, a magical creature is watching
him from afar. The creature changes its appearance into a bird and deliberately let
itself caught by Pak Lah.
At his house, Pak Lah is shocked when the bird that he had caught turns into a
beautiful woman. So, he asked who is she and what is her intention. She explains
that she is a Bunian Princess and her intention of following him home is to tell
him that she had fallen in love with him. He is happy to accept her confession. They are dating for a few years and decided to get married.
In order to get married they have to get a blessing from the Princess’s
father. He is extremely mad after finding out his beloved daughter wants to marry a human
being. So, he put three conditions to test her eagerness. First, she needs to soak
her body in Gua Tujuh Kolam for 2 days. Second, she is required to dry her body
in Gua Angin for 1 day. Lastly, she has to spend 4 days 3 nights in Gua Kelawar
that is popular for its darkness. She does all of them because she is
determined to marry Pak Lah.
Because his daughter completes all of her tasks successfully, he
allows them to get married. Pak Lah and the Princess are excited and grateful. The
Princess father held a grand ceremony for their marriage and they lived happily
in the Bunian world.
However, after three years Pak Lah starts to miss his friends and relatives, so he
asks the Princess to allow him visiting his village. The princess is reluctant
at first. But, because she worries her husband will get sick from sadness,
she grants his wish with one condition. She asks Pak Lah to promise her that he
will return in 2 months.
As he arrives in the village, he is confused because nobody welcomes him like he had expected.
Actually, the time in the Bunian world is slower than the human world. Therefore,
in the villager’s eyes he had only gone for three months not three years which
is a normal thing for a traveler like him.
After a few months, Pak Lah gain popularity because of the
medical knowledge that he acquired from the Bunian world help him heals the
sick villagers. Having a blast, he forgets
about his promise. One year already passes, he is ready to return to his wife
in the Bunian world.
Upon arrival, the Princess refuses to meet Pak Lah because he breaks his
promise. Pak Lah does not realise that 1 year in the human
world is equal to 12 years of the Princess waiting for him. Pak Lah is regretful and
begs for forgiveness but the Princess does not accept it. Pak Lah then vows to
stay right in front of the Princess until she forgives him. Pak Lah waits for 20
years but the Princess not even once turn her back to face him. He died at the
same spot with regret.
-zamzarif- (556 words)

Very interesting short story! Well done.
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